Ebru Emirbayer

advisor

https://z-p15.www.instagram.com/emirbayerebru/

Turkish

I am an Architect from Turkey.Last year of my bachelor, I studied in Poland and I attend… more

Dear Christina Jeanette,
I would like to say,I appreciate the conception and aim of your work.The idea of preserving cultural identity is well defined and the material that you choose are compatible with your perception.I have some comments about your poster:
-As a first,I would like to see the relationship between the building and surrounding in your board in order to make stronger your idea.
The process of the creation of building form as diagram could help to demonstrate it.Addition to this,existing intangible elements should have shown there to support idea.
-Secondly,The plans,elevations and sections seem not comprehensible very well,you could put in a different way.
-Furthermore,It would be clear,If we could see the identification of materials in a detail way which are choosen as concidering sustainability aspect.
To conclude,The visualisations,renders,the diagrams regarding circulation etc. are well organised.From my point of view, the idea was integrated to the artifact( adding lotus shape of canopy, the opennings as diamond pattern,the materials that are choosen).There are a few additions need to be organise as you see on the above part.Thanks for your effort!!