PROJECTS FEEDBACK

Any participant in the INSPIRELI AWARDS competition can ask a member of the international jury for feedback on his/her competition project. Jurors are assigned across continents at a ratio of one juror per student. The resulting gallery is a unique architecture textbook, created free of charge by those who wish to participate in our project and contribute their work to the education of the up and coming generation. We are honored that you are sharing your designs and experiences here.

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Cultural projects feedbacks

Thank you Sarah Safty The concept is intriguing but regarding your presentation; all that is required is for you to elaborate on the composition of your sheet; it may be best to exhibit your concept openly and compose your sheet accordingly. Thank you very much INSPIRELi

Batool Musa Jaffari

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Batool Musa Jaffari

This project is a bit difficult for me to critique, because I do not have enough cultural knowledge to confidently say what is 'good' or 'bad' about your design. I will say that the people in your research, and the one praying individual in your rendering, are powerful. But the lack of people in many of your drawings make the project feel more object-focused than subject-focused. The landscape of your project also feels like an afterthought, rather than an opportunity to either reinforce your…

Philip Horton

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Philip Horton

The geometric and material influences of Louis Khan seem to be stronger here than the influences of the river, or of the concept of a goli. I would like to be able to better understand the dynamic conditions of the river through this project. Does the river rise and fall? Is there any risk of flooding at the library, and if so, how has that informed the design? Also, the goli concept seems to be only somewhat successful here, because the space in the middle still feels more like an atrium…

Philip Horton

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Philip Horton

The approach, which includes interdisciplinarity and the relationship of subjective, personal, and neutral perceptions of the problem and characteristics of the area in general, gave added value to the project. The main (general) project aim is good and connected with its application to the port area through urban planning and design principles. A particular contribution of the work is the extensive analysis of local culture, lifestyle, and needs of local citizens, which were the basis for…

Mirjana Barać

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Mirjana Barać

The project has an interesting idea and concept of the transformation and arrangement of the port area, which is accompanied by a detailed elaboration of individual planned facilities. The presented visualizations, isometric, and other three-dimensional views adequately reflect the way of arranging and using the port area, although establishing a different relationship between them on the panel could contribute to better readability of the information and better highlighting of all the…

Mirjana Barać

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Mirjana Barać

This leisure center is a great design idea, with the location carefully chosen for the target group (students). I would love to spend time in the building as a student. The building is characterized by glazing, which gives views and allows for daylighting in spaces. The project description mentioned the use of daylighting in the auditorium. However, this is not captured very well in the drawings. Also, with such a large auditorium, it will be prudent to establish ventilation systems and energy…

Kwabena Abrokwa Gyimah

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Kwabena Abrokwa Gyimah

Interesting work on the organization of a public space for communication between people with the color of natural cultures and the coverage of departments of materials in architecture. But, be that as it may, the presentation in popular authors. 1 Clearer floor plans. (blurry, difficult to read plans) With the name of the premises and functional zoning. the availability of possibly accessible questions for people with limited tastes. 2 No master plan. Or a situational scheme with orientation…

Maxim Artamonov

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Maxim Artamonov

It is in deed a unique project and use of technology to build the very interesting façade. If we discuss about the building components, its a traditional construction covered with a skin yet married well. Another way of looking at it is to make every bit of the experience is maintaining from exterior view to the interior architecture. If you could study the same voronoi patterns which you have used in 2D in 3D and create spaces it would be very interesting. Though the form is generated with…

Edirisooriya Arachchige Tharanga Suresh

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Edirisooriya Arachchige Tharanga Suresh

Hi Carolina its been an Honor to review your project..... :) this is a beautiful project and make me do some initial research about the site. this is my comment: 1. The Silos Memorial development should be parallel with the bussiness district development. The bussiness district should be initiated on the first place because it can be an attractor to both Marina and residential area. It can also escalate the land price and the value of the area and give a significant impact on taxes revenue…

Adli Nadia

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Adli Nadia

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