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Any participant in the INSPIRELI AWARDS competition can ask a member of the international jury for feedback on his/her competition project. Jurors are assigned across continents at a ratio of one juror per student. The resulting gallery is a unique architecture textbook, created free of charge by those who wish to participate in our project and contribute their work to the education of the up and coming generation. We are honored that you are sharing your designs and experiences here.

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Memorial projects feedbacks

Design is an important form of communication. When used well it makes a significant impact on people, especially when the message is delivered well. The project gives us little insight into how this communication through design happens. In the images presented, the relationship between exterior and interior is not well understood. The green roof was a smart bet that could be explored more and take more advantage of it. The use of architectural parameterization shows how the project is engaged…

Samuel Santos

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Samuel Santos

This sketch can serve as the basis for the main project, but it's too early to judge the final idea, since, in my opinion, the proposed solution is quite conceptually presented. Of those points that I would like to correct - this is the direction of the pedestrian boulevard, which should not only go from some visual object through interesting sights, but also come somewhere. This project does not have such a clear start and end point. Because of this, the impression of a "torn" context is…

Nataliya Larina

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Nataliya Larina

your concept is very interesting, the idea for the kids to track how far they have come through the growth of the trees sound good and exciting. But i think when you came to the form, you lost the concept. its like the concept And the form are not working together. i would have loved if you also showed this progress/growth in the buildings. like have a building that is representing the start, and progress according to the progression of the kids. and you can take advantage of the slope to…

Maness Neba Makondi

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Maness Neba Makondi

After analyzing the project,there are several points that must be mentioned The positives of the project: The project has been devided into separate sections.There is a diversity of functional activities (commercial,recreational,cultural,...) linking them with the Boulevard as an essential element and also the interrelationship with the river. It is good to take into account the presence of a memorial symbol for the explosion of the harbor . It is also useful to recycle the containers in the…

Houida Khuzam

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Houida Khuzam

The project is well presented through description and drawings. On urban design level, from the first look, it gives impression as it’s target the residential investment more then the port development as the large scale of land use. For the land use distribution, it was needed to have more relation between the passenger terminal and the port as they both needs authority control. For the water canals between residential areas and the closed sea area in front of memorial zone, it need more…

Eslam Elsamahy

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Eslam Elsamahy

The project is an interesting position on redefining mix use and vertical living. It questions the design response to high density, poor territorial planning and lack of infrastructure. The comments are structured at two scales: I. Site layout Plan: The project centres around the open spaces, river as a featured element. The source and regular maintenance issues need to be thought as much. The techniques of collecting rain water from roofs and collection can be undertaken in the river. River…

Sandeep Paul

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Sandeep Paul

Good afternoon! I would like to congratulate your team on the opportunity to represent the project at the international level! I like how the presented project proposes the organization of a saturated public space with the zones of attraction on the embankment. It makes access to water open for the public. It is also a good idea to make an opportunity of different viewpoints on the memorial. However, the project lacks a clear functional zoning of the territory, which would allow the formation…

Olga Malykh

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Olga Malykh

The project as a conceptual design is looks good with its theme and concept and also through the distribution of land uses in relation to the surrounding context but in detail, it was not clear enough to show the circulation networks between vehicles and pedestrians, public spaces and service circulation in addition to the different relation between private, semi private and public zones. The use of the dome with huge scale is not logic especially from structure, environment and the need for…

Eslam Elsamahy

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Eslam Elsamahy

The New born- New life project is an interesting project especially in terms of concept and function. The idea of giving a vibrant life to a building that was previously abandoned is valid and good. There are however three concerns: the first is regarding the relation between the building and the surrounding landscape and the further built-up area; the building does not seem well integrated with both, the second is about the bulkiness of the building, and the third is regarding the high…

Maha Samman

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Maha Samman

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