PROJECTS FEEDBACK

Any participant in the INSPIRELI AWARDS competition can ask a member of the international jury for feedback on his/her competition project. Jurors are assigned across continents at a ratio of one juror per student. The resulting gallery is a unique architecture textbook, created free of charge by those who wish to participate in our project and contribute their work to the education of the up and coming generation. We are honored that you are sharing your designs and experiences here.

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Educational projects feedbacks

Hello! In the beginning, I want to thank you for participating and creating this interesting proposal. - First of all, the detailing of the project is beautiful, just as an advise for the presentation in the future renders keep the photos as much as clear as they could be "fewer people count" or at least use "HQ 3d people models " and concentrate on putting value on the created project and you points of interest by "correct light direction, correct material usage and try to find good angles…

Ezzeddin Alasali

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Ezzeddin Alasali

Dear Elina Sakhautdinova It seems that this study is the product of intensive research. In my opinion, you have captured very important points in the context of the subject. So, ı found your approaches succesful. However, I need to point out that there are some things I don't understand because I am unfamiliar with the alphabet and language you used. Also, its hard to understand the images because of low resolution, and texts are not readable. Creating an ethno complex is quite a difficult…

Bilal Bilgili

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Bilal Bilgili

Greetings and congratulations on your project, Nouran Khaled. I appreciate the initiative and the fact that you think for disabled people, who have the right to a normal life despite their disability. Architecturally, your project integrates and evokes something special from the ancient Egyptian architectural heritage. It's a good project, congratulations and good luck.

Sergiu-Andrei BRIȘCULESCU

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Sergiu-Andrei BRIȘCULESCU

Hello, your project is simply impressive, I like the diagrams, and the code images which reflects the hard work behind the project. The design of the project is also remarkable, the exterior shape is dynamic, with an organic design, and also it was a good idea to isolate the expositional space from the other sources of distractions (both interior and exterior), letting the visitors to concentrate on the exposed heritage. Perhaps the presented text puts too much emphasis on the idea of ​​black…

Sergiu-Andrei BRIȘCULESCU

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Sergiu-Andrei BRIȘCULESCU

The idea of the project is always needed to take place and the space you included are good but the plans could be further improved due to tight corridors. From the technicalities of the presentation the 2D presentation of the elevations could be further improved with the addition of a monochromatic palette. I like the 3D section it really shows your idea. The last thing is the shade direction, is it according to the sun path or it won't be angled? Finally keep up the good work!

Farah Daghash

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Farah Daghash

This project is a bit difficult for me to critique, because I do not have enough cultural knowledge to confidently say what is 'good' or 'bad' about your design. I will say that the people in your research, and the one praying individual in your rendering, are powerful. But the lack of people in many of your drawings make the project feel more object-focused than subject-focused. The landscape of your project also feels like an afterthought, rather than an opportunity to either reinforce your…

Philip Horton

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Philip Horton

The geometric and material influences of Louis Khan seem to be stronger here than the influences of the river, or of the concept of a goli. I would like to be able to better understand the dynamic conditions of the river through this project. Does the river rise and fall? Is there any risk of flooding at the library, and if so, how has that informed the design? Also, the goli concept seems to be only somewhat successful here, because the space in the middle still feels more like an atrium…

Philip Horton

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Philip Horton

The approach, which includes interdisciplinarity and the relationship of subjective, personal, and neutral perceptions of the problem and characteristics of the area in general, gave added value to the project. The main (general) project aim is good and connected with its application to the port area through urban planning and design principles. A particular contribution of the work is the extensive analysis of local culture, lifestyle, and needs of local citizens, which were the basis for…

Mirjana Barać

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Mirjana Barać

This leisure center is a great design idea, with the location carefully chosen for the target group (students). I would love to spend time in the building as a student. The building is characterized by glazing, which gives views and allows for daylighting in spaces. The project description mentioned the use of daylighting in the auditorium. However, this is not captured very well in the drawings. Also, with such a large auditorium, it will be prudent to establish ventilation systems and energy…

Kwabena Abrokwa Gyimah

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Kwabena Abrokwa Gyimah

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