Hello Dragos, hope you are doing well. First, I want to tell you that I really like how you manage to make the connections and shapes with clear volumes considering the light, the landscape and the view for the users in every space. Your composition looks smooth and clean. Following, I address some points that you can try to explore in your project: 1. Main Volumes. The shapes and textures you used seem correct for the project. You can try to add a second skin in precise spaces for light and…
Jose Carlo Bolaños Padillaadvisor
I think the idea of creating an 'Open Bauhus' is a good idea. But the strategies to implement is not very clear from the drawings. So, it is hard to follow the existing situation and the designed scenarios. Perhaps a design diagram showing the strategies to be implemented and before-after scenarios might help portray the case as well as the idea more clearly.
The Repetitive Modular form is understood and helping the general layout but few remarks should be taken care of: 1- The Platform of the upper underground floor is heavy. 2- The regularity of the skylights opening didn't help enough or give added value to the character of the project,u should be thinking of giving vivacity to the opening in a different creative way and forms. 3- The treatment of the facades should be worked more creatively. 4- Try to give more character to the general visuals…
This is a very well written detailed proposal. I enjoyed the reference to Vienna and aiming to capture it within your design as a tribute. The curtain wall you proposed as the façade of the new block facing the courtyard impressed me. You have aimed to utilize the sunlight which is entering from the south western direction and also took care of this light intensity in the summer by providing columns and arches for the ground and upper floor levels. The double height roof from the ground level…
very impressive work , l can see your project has been done in modular balance symmetrical lines also how you did apply your module in 3 dimension part of the project. that give a certain vibe to the design . to make your work more interesting sense your talking about the energy management i will suggest to find the perfect unite shape for your design , like find the relation between the surface and the volume that slow down the energy lose in one unite . if you do not understand what i mean…
Dear Vojt?ch Erlebach, Your design seems interesting but to attend a professional International student competition you should fill in the Project idea, Project description, and Technical information as well as send us more images of your design and other drawing sheets. In this case, I find it difficult to give feedback. Thanks, Soheil.
Soheil Moghadam Falahiadvisor
Neat and clean presentation. 3d visualization is excellent. Project idea is good.
Sharif Tousif Hossainadvisor
The project proposal is professionally paginated. The project is well studied on the whole, even if the surfaces destined to toilets are few, creating long paths to reach them. Some other perplexities are the collection of rainwater and its disposal. The project also has overhanging volumes of a certain structural importance that could cancel some effects of lightness desired in the project. It is always a dilemma to achieve a good balance between architectural form and functional form, however…
Pietro Nicola Musolinoadvisor