Mehwish Javaid Hussain
Lahore College forWomen University
Depiction of the "Kashmir issue" physically through architecture which reminds us of many years and becomes a source to solve this issue. more
Architecture. Interior design. Landscaping project. Urban design. more
I would advise the architect to work out the volume of the building in more detail, now, in my opinion, the volume is not readable, perhaps you need to work with color by adding it to the perspective image of the building. In general, to make the submission of the project more lively.
I would have worked out in more detail the environment of the building, showing in detail its integration into the existing environment and terrain.
You can try to combine all the information into one image by placing the key perspective views of the building, the main plans and the structure of the building.
Now the floor plans are quite developed, but they look too formal, you can take the function of each room out of the redistribution plans and add a few interior views.
Depiction of the "Kashmir issue" physically through architecture which reminds us of many years and becomes a source to solve this issue.
To show the problems of Kashmiris which they have faced for more than 7 decades of their lives and the emotions of all the Muslim and Non-Muslim towards this serious issue.
The use of sharp edges in the design structure shows how the "Kashmir issue" continuously pinpoints Muslims and other people worldwide.