Perla Abou Sleiman

advisor

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Lebanese

Architecture is both the method and product of arranging, planning, and developing shape, space,… more

Dear Mostafa, Thank you for sharing your project

I appreciated your hard work, although I don't know the program of your project, I would like to give you my opinion about your project:
Graphically, when you have to present a project, stay clear in the presentation of your boards: don't worry about the empty spaces: white part, it is really necessary to understand the project directly when we see the presentation boards. In your case it was difficult to read the board: the plans, the facades, the concept. Try to choose different presentation methods (without background).
Secondly, it would be more interesting to develop the project so that it would look more real, and why not build it in the future. You should opt for more real 3d rendering and shapes maybe by changing the material used on Lumion. Try to think about capturing less perspectives.
I really liked the configuration of the ground plan, the project is integrated in its land and with its surroundings: landscape.
Finally, I wish you a good continuation.

Please consider my criticisms as a way to help you present your project better. Hope my comments will be helpful in your future project development.

Regards,