University of Ilorin, Ilorin
The aim of this project is to provide a simple, functional and economic friendly design for the client more
CTU in Prague - Faculty of Civil Engineering
Architect, writer, scientist and university teacher. Formal Vice-Chairman of the Czech Architects… more
Dear Emmanuel, first of all I would like to mention that this is a student competition and the project seems to be something like a real proposal for a client. But if you are a student and you are the creator of such a project, then I would recommend to dispel these doubts in the description of the project.
Furthermore, it seems to me that the description is insufficient given the details of the attached documentation. I would recommend to describe more not only the whole background of the project, but especially the way of use. If it is a house for occasional use in nature with friends, then the equipment and structure of the interior is probably fine. But if it is a house for ordinary family life, then it seems to me that you should consider adding storage space. The few cabinets in the designs seem to me to be insufficient for everyday family life.
As for the presentation of the composition of the whole house (houses) with a garden, I would definitely recommend adding hand sketches and modifying the 3D presentation according to the feed-back of Inspireli 3D specialists, who will also comment on this project. Personally, I'm proud that our paths through this platform have been able to meet, and that you're open enough to ask for a feed-back. I believe that this project will show its great potential to the full.
I wish you good luck Karel from Prague.