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Thank you Sarah Safty The concept is intriguing but regarding your presentation; all that is required is for you to elaborate on the composition of your sheet; it may be best to exhibit your concept openly and compose your sheet accordingly. Thank you very much INSPIRELi
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The approach, which includes interdisciplinarity and the relationship of subjective, personal, and neutral perceptions of the problem and characteristics of the area in general, gave added value to the project. The main (general) project aim is good and connected with its application to the port area through urban planning and design principles. A particular contribution of the work is the extensive analysis of local culture, lifestyle, and needs of local citizens, which were the basis for…
The project has an interesting idea and concept of the transformation and arrangement of the port area, which is accompanied by a detailed elaboration of individual planned facilities. The presented visualizations, isometric, and other three-dimensional views adequately reflect the way of arranging and using the port area, although establishing a different relationship between them on the panel could contribute to better readability of the information and better highlighting of all the…
Hi Carolina its been an Honor to review your project..... :) this is a beautiful project and make me do some initial research about the site. this is my comment: 1. The Silos Memorial development should be parallel with the bussiness district development. The bussiness district should be initiated on the first place because it can be an attractor to both Marina and residential area. It can also escalate the land price and the value of the area and give a significant impact on taxes revenue…
It is good to see another zahahadidesque way of creating shapes. I personally liked this approach to urban grid - lively and irregular. Overall impession is also convinient (if we leave unnoticed out-of-scale kiter on the foreground, of course). The area surrounding the silo is also well designed but the amount of eathwork needed is huge - that is the main question of this project for me. Speaking of the silo - I'm asking myself - yes this is a renmant of the tragedy - but do we really need to…
Ambitious program for a very sustainable vision. A very thoroughly thought out functional scheme, I find. I really like the way Benjamin has thought of every relevant detail, icluding visual and functional integration into the neighbourhood. Graphic representation of the project is great. I really like the watercolour-like visuals, as part of a nature concept. so much more easy to relate to them than realistic computer visions.
Dear Alaa Abd-Alkarem, It is nice work. Airport design is so complex. Conflicting and diverging circulations of passengers, their relatives, luggage, security, terminal personnel are very important. Unfortunately, due to the low resolution of the photos, the plans cannot be seen in detail. It was not possible to select the passenger and luggage traffic. In Section DD, the connection of the floor of the upper floor on the right with the roof is problematic. The Parking lot form didn't need to…
The representation of the project is quite satisfactory. Well done. The high-rise buildings on the waterfront are disturbing in the morphology of the city. The design of this area blocks the visual connection of the city with the sea, and the grouping of the buildings is closely related. In the urban context, the bridge that will carry people to the port seems to complicate the work. This issue could have been easily resolved. It occupies too much of the residential area on three separate…
Dear Muhammed, I have always believed that a successful project must have a strong meaning and idea that tells a story. Your project definitely reflects this and the execution of the idea can be seen through out the extents of the project. I think the control of light has been done quite well. You have created some very interesting details and I think you should select one or two of them and apply a level of detail that shows how you expect them to work. Great job.