Majed Alaa
Cihan University
Iraq
Architecture
The Farmer Villa
The farmhouse is a project based on imagination and has not been implemented on the ground. I designed it inside a farmhouse as the initial idea of the project is based on the shape of an ax and pickaxe, and I was also inspired by the design of the balcony from the shape of the ground comb.
Feedback A
This visualization has nice camera settings. The natural range is good, but small unfinished work or too geometric elements stand out. An example for all, the end of the road / path is too sharp and does not connect to the land of the house even with respect to the terrace. At this moment it looks like building is abandoned.
Feedback A/2
This shot can be improved simly by adding some decorations for showing life in this building. Or just create a paths to front doors and so on.
Feedback B
Try to use 2-point perspective. It will help you to get better understanding of your design for most people. You can find setting here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n_NOE2Ioi3I
Feedback C
Al these pictures have a nice camera setting, and even green is well placed. It is only a bit too dark. It would be nice to use a G.I. function to improve realistic look of lights. Here is how: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6-0Cxg8xAao and for sun: https://youtu.be/RSUO7PFmyUs
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