Veronika Supruniuk
Brest State Technical University
Belarus
Architecture
S Squares
Our concept is based on a circle as an ideal shape that forms the number 7 (like 7 wonders of the world) and S the name of showrooms. In our project, the most important 7 circle is a prayer room for all visitors, which, like a miracle of the world, attracts visitors from the road. Other circles create retail spaces where everyone will find what they need. This project creates a mini city inside. LET’S FEEL THE ATMOSPHERE OF THE PROJECT TOGETHER BY WATCHING THE VIDEO S SQUARES https://youtu…
Feedback A
Great model, texturing and the overall detail. Also the atmosphere is quite interesting, I like it a lot in general. Only thing I would avoid is the forework on the very left - these very bright components tend to "steal" the attention and viewer´s focus from the most important part - the architectural object in the middle. You can always move it closer to the building (behind it) where it´s doesn´t harm the focus that much.
Feedback B
Great axonometry, explains the whole mass clearly and the color palette is interesting. Well done.
Feedback C
The architecture is very interesting and with great detail but I find this picture a bit too "wild", it does not have a clear focal point so I get a bit lost. Maybe just by deleting some of the emissive and oversaturated elements the architecture would stand out more, since they steal a lot of attention.
Feedback D
Love it that you use the model to represent the project in various ways, everything is easy to see and understand, especially in they axo-sections.
Feedback E
Not quite sure what these dense lines represent so if they have no construction purpose I would consider playing with line thickness and opacity so the really important structure stands out. Otherwise all good.
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