Brest State Technical University
Our concept is based on a circle as an ideal shape that forms the number 7 (like 7 wonders of the world) and S the name of showrooms. In our project, the most important 7 circle is a prayer room for all visitors, which, like a miracle of the world, attracts visitors from the road. Other circles create retail spaces where everyone will find what they need. This project creates a mini city inside. LET’S FEEL THE ATMOSPHERE OF THE PROJECT TOGETHER BY WATCHING THE VIDEO S SQUARES https://youtu…
Great axonometry, explains the whole mass clearly and the color palette is interesting. Well done.
Great model, texturing and the overall detail. Also the atmosphere is quite interesting, I like it a lot in general. Only thing I would avoid is the forework on the very left - these very bright components tend to "steal" the attention and viewer´s focus from the most important part - the architectural object in the middle. You can always move it closer to the building (behind it) where it´s doesn´t harm the focus that much.
The architecture is very interesting and with great detail but I find this picture a bit too "wild", it does not have a clear focal point so I get a bit lost. Maybe just by deleting some of the emissive and oversaturated elements the architecture would stand out more, since they steal a lot of attention.
Not quite sure what these dense lines represent so if they have no construction purpose I would consider playing with line thickness and opacity so the really important structure stands out. Otherwise all good.
Love it that you use the model to represent the project in various ways, everything is easy to see and understand, especially in they axo-sections.