Urban Design and Landscape
After dealing with urban problems and anarchic urbanization in Beirut. And the chaos that has created social and spatial inequalities in certain places and in… more
Abhishek Rao is an architect, artist, noted illustrator and the founder of Abhishek Rao Studio, a… more
First of all congratulations for uploading your and also for being part of the INSPIRELI community. It is really nice to see the you have analyzed the existing conditions in detail and came up with a fresh solution. This has really been well though and nicely conceptualized. However I'd like mention few points that you might consider so that you can add more value to this. 1) I'd really suggest you to follow any particular presentation style so that the continuity remains intact throughout while viewers go through your work as per the sequence. 2) A little bit of post production touch up will make your rendering look great! 3) You may consider writing important texts in English so that it could be understandable by all. 4) Addition of light is something that I fest is missing in your rendering. Minor illuminations could really glow it up! 5) few images have been grained out. You may reconsider the quality of image output. 6) I liked the way you have ventured into the design and considered multiple parameters which is absolutely necessary for this project 7) I'd suggest you to detail out the technical drawing a bit and to work on your presentation techniques. This would add the cherry on the top of the cake!