Etta Madete

advisor

https://www.uonbi.ac.ke/

Kenya

I am an architectural designer at BuildX Studio, a lecturer(TF) at the University of Nairobi and an… more

Great work Shiva. Three points to really improve the project are;
1. Connect to the context; What is the macro-level context of the piece/project, both in answer to the type of poetry you wish to house as well as the community you wish to serve. Who is the audience of the spaces and the content? this would enable me to understand if the building forms and spatial design are appropriate
2. Connect to nature and indoor/outdoor sensitivity; Nature is an important part of poetry I believe, I wish I would have seen more aspects of the 'non' built explored here in order to accentuate the contrast between natural and man-made words and spaces.
3. Demonstrate the flows; How does the space connect and work together, I was missing layout plans that clearly show how a visitor of the space would move through and interact with the building and its displays/information.