Nadia Abdul Rahman
Department of Architecture of the Faculty of Engineering, Ain Shams University in Abbaseya, Cairo
Al-Alamein city is located on the Mediterranean sea and contains a lot of artificial lakes , and I wanted to make the tower as a landmark in this new city showing the power and future through its design , so I began to think about the relationship between the sea and the landmark near to it then I have chosen the shark to represent this power of the futuristic tower as it is the strongest creature in the sea world.
This image should not be the first because there is simply no way to see the whole design. But otherwise it is processed well and we can see the effort to diversify the image with lights pointing at the building and lights from cars. It would certainly be possible to work on them, put some variance there and so on. What disturbs the visuals the most are the illegible materials, especially the ones drawn, too dark. There should also be more reflections on the surfaces if I understand what they should look like.
This picture was definitely supposed to be the first, because it shows the whole building and clearly states that it is exceptional. Which fits her purpose. But because the design is optically simple, which is attractive, it is necessary to pay attention to the detailed settings of materials, lights, decorations, etc. This is quite nicely done here, only the materials are not completely legible for me. It would definitely like to add reflections to the surfaces.