VIPIN WILSON

advisor

Anna University - Tamil Nadu

Indian

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Dear Ahmed ElAshry,

I am very glad to see your airport design. The approach that you have taken for the project is interesting, adding to your input into the process of design I would like to pitch in a few pointers that can help you in terms of your overall presentation and conclusion of your work.
1. You can look into sequencing your design output in order from the point you started to how it has been developed more excitingly, i felt the quantum of hard work you put into the design has not been justified in the presentation you have made.
2. The project description and details are very basic since that is the first part we get to see I would suggest that you make that more detailed and clear.
3. The cover page you selected also does not give any hindsight on what project is that you are dealing with and the written medium is not English for me to understand it would have been great if an aerial or a view of the airport was put up as the cover page.

These are the points i would like to put up, i hope the same helps you in your upcoming projects. Thank you.