Francesco Leoni

advisor

www.polimi.it

Italian

I'm an architect with its own firm in Piacenza, Italy.I'm also an Adjunct Professor at Politecnico… more

Dear Mahfuz Mahi,
I start by expressing my appreciation for your project.
The desire to create a visual relationship with the outside is very appreciable and the attempt to develop an organic formalism to try to fit your intervention in the context is evident.
However, there are some elements that, in my opinion, should be treated better.
First of all, the inclusion in the landscape is not very understandable, since there are not any drawings on a scale that would allow me to understand the context and, at first glance, your theater could risk looking like a spaceship on the lake. It might make sense, but from your project report I don't think that's the intent.
A second note relates to the homogeneity of the building: in fact from the outside it has a strongly organic connotation in the use of curved shapes, while inside the partitions, in section, are rigid and orthogonal.
I invite you to continue applying yourself to continue improving your already remarkable skills.
Francesco Leoni

Greetings Francesco Leoni,
Thank you for your detailed critic.
I will try to work on the sections to make the interiors organic.
Your valuable comment inspired me to work more on projects like these. Thank you for that.
Regards
Mahfuz Mahi