It is better to adjust the reflection of the glass using the effect of planar reflections, see here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PCXbPUBSarc
Red - Lumion contains hundreds of additional models such as coffee, cake, fruit, drinks. It is good to use it.
Blue - It would be better to use a larger focal length indoors, as well as a 2-point perspective. The image will be more readable, but it will also be better to see the contrast of the outer shell with the interior perpendicular shapes.
There are a lot of lights, but the shadows are too sharp and there is basically only one shadow. It would be good to add some additional lights to the emissive material, also turn on and set the GI, see here: https://youtu.be/RSUO7PFmyUs and here: https://youtu.be/6-0Cxg8xAao
This image should not be the first because there is simply no way to see the whole design. But otherwise it is processed well and we can see the effort to diversify the image with lights pointing at the building and lights from cars. It would certainly be possible to work on them, put some variance there and so on. What disturbs the visuals the most are the illegible materials, especially the ones drawn, too dark. There should also be more reflections on the surfaces if I understand what they should look like.