PROJECTS FEEDBACK

Any participant in the INSPIRELI AWARDS competition can ask a member of the international jury for feedback on his/her competition project. Jurors are assigned across continents at a ratio of one juror per student. The resulting gallery is a unique architecture textbook, created free of charge by those who wish to participate in our project and contribute their work to the education of the up and coming generation. We are honored that you are sharing your designs and experiences here.

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Cemetery projects feedbacks

At the beginning, I would like to thank you for introducing me to this magnificent work. After seeing your design, I tried to read more about this place and its values ??to add to my knowledge, as well as to learn more about the necessity of your design. Preserving the valuable buildings and places of the past is one of our social and professional duties that you have done well in this project. By changing the use and adding some features, the place and building can be revived in a way that is…

Mohsen Kheirmand Parizi

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Mohsen Kheirmand Parizi

I have to say about the plan and purpose that you had that impressed me, and I ask all my students to design this way and pay attention to the challenges. Addressing the problems and needs is one of the right and valuable ways of design, and this shows that you are a concerned designer and we will definitely hear more from you in the coming years. I hope you follow this path well and build many buildings with your design art, each of which will solve a problem or be a response to the needs of…

Mohsen Kheirmand Parizi

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Mohsen Kheirmand Parizi

Hello Dragos, hope you are doing well. First, I want to tell you that I really like how you manage to make the connections and shapes with clear volumes considering the light, the landscape and the view for the users in every space. Your composition looks smooth and clean. Following, I address some points that you can try to explore in your project: 1. Main Volumes. The shapes and textures you used seem correct for the project. You can try to add a second skin in precise spaces for light and…

Jose Carlo Bolaños Padilla

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Jose Carlo Bolaños Padilla

The Concept idea is nicely taught off including the sketches..What is needed to elaborate more the Composition to get the shape more homogeneous and lifted up to get the impression of a monumental sculpture at the end.

Wael DEBS

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Wael DEBS

I think the idea of creating an 'Open Bauhus' is a good idea. But the strategies to implement is not very clear from the drawings. So, it is hard to follow the existing situation and the designed scenarios. Perhaps a design diagram showing the strategies to be implemented and before-after scenarios might help portray the case as well as the idea more clearly.

Salma Begum

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Salma Begum

The Project has a character and gives a sense of nice feeling, the wooden material helps to reach this kind of feeling. What maybe could be done is to work more on the positive and negative spaces i.e to subtract and add elements in a more visual way to the hole structure or outside the envelope.

Wael DEBS

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Wael DEBS

Hi student The concept or main idea is quite interesting. But the representation of the project becomes a bit confusing, because you show what exists, which in this case is the "Campus" with the same level of importance of your project and the important thing about your project is the path that circulates through the "Campus" to join 2 points. I see 2 important observations to take into account: 1.- Project development Your project is the "Path" that joins points A and B. What you call "The…

Yubal Guillén

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Yubal  Guillén

Hi dear Cristian Fernando Martínez The idea of rehabilitating an old path and changing its use to improve the quality of space and neighborhood is always interesting and of course challenging. of course In this road, it should be noted that if there is a diagonal path, how are the uses created along the path related to the second and third layers, and if the diagonal path is added to the space, which uses it passes through, which is worth halving Have a neighborhood. Also, the most important…

Mahsa Hazbi

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Mahsa Hazbi

Dear Samantha, You have started to shape your project based on a very interesting idea that is both clear and unique, but it is just visible in the description part. Since you are presenting your architecture project it is completely necessary to convert mentioned ideas to visual diagrams as well. In this way, your project can be read accurately. I have to add besides your good modeling and renderings you also need to put technical drawings such as floor plans, sections, and elevations in your…

Omid Abbassi

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Omid Abbassi