PROJECTS FEEDBACK

Any participant in the INSPIRELI AWARDS competition can ask a member of the international jury for feedback on his/her competition project. Jurors are assigned across continents at a ratio of one juror per student. The resulting gallery is a unique architecture textbook, created free of charge by those who wish to participate in our project and contribute their work to the education of the up and coming generation. We are honored that you are sharing your designs and experiences here.

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Hospitality + Sport projects feedbacks

Dear Aliyu Yunusa, I think you made a nice project for a bakery / restaurant! I like your idea of using local materials, because they are sustainable and energy efficient. To improve your project, I would recommend you to improve your layout / presentation. I hardly can read your ground floor, because it is overlayed with the rendering. Maybe you should use brighter colors. If you position the ground floor in the same picture under the rendering, the position of ground floor and…

Magdalena Tröbinger

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Magdalena Tröbinger

Dear Samuel, Sometimes it is more ambitious to rehabilitate an existing space rather than creating a new one. Your project is a very good effort of renovation of an abandoned place in terms of physical planning, graphical presentation, and technical drawings as well as clear renderings but there are some missing points in your project that can improve the presentation. first of all, there is no clear diagram about the design process so that the whole scenario can be easily followed. secondly,…

Omid Abbassi

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Omid Abbassi

I did find your work very interesting and to make even more interesting I would like you to check this project ( 21st century industrial housing in the united kingdom) see how they designed the roof of the building .

sarah ibrahimbasha

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sarah ibrahimbasha

Deaf Culture Club Your first slide I like the most. I like these old ornamental windows which mostly were a major part of Christianity churches. Designed on large drawings or transparent papers. Mostly in a 1:1 scale, so they could also be used as templates. Imagine all done by hand, bent over for many hours to get them perfect. There was the human connection from the brain over the hand to the paper. No mechanics, no computer, no calculators. Just a human being creating these beauties with…

Wolf Wilbert

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Wolf Wilbert

Jin Song has shown his aesthetic ability in producing a fine presentation for the project. The idea about technological advancements from materials to building systems is great. However, the architecture doesn’t show strong reflection expressing the key ideas through architectural components that people can experience and learn from to understand the correlations among building’s components, ideas, technologies, surrounding natural components. Raising the buildings on steel stilts creates …

Thana Chirapiwat

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Thana Chirapiwat

Love the design What is missing is the need of why we need this building. Also need to see more interruption as this is a long building to break the tension in the design. The sustainability could be more green to give the design more color and it could be more into the vertical shutters. With this new age of green sustainability, this is a really important feature and one of the most important when convincing a jury. The presentation could be more focused on the 3D, Less is more show bigger…

Gershon Pocorni

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Gershon Pocorni

The goal of the project could be more focused on the problem and why we need this wellness center and that makes it easier to explain the solutions which is the design concept. The presentation is amazing detailed but for presentations you don't need a lot of details just show the 3D and maybe one 3D section , think less is more but less also creates better focus and makes the concept flawless to much details makes it messy. The design is amazing love it, the only thing that is missing is…

Gershon Pocorni

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Gershon Pocorni

I tapped in the search engine in Google "SHANKARPUR, WEST BENGAL hurricanes" and found such recent 2021 videos in economictimes.indiatimes.com and Youtube: 1. Watch: Cyclone Yaas batters coastal districts in West Bengal https://economictimes.indiatimes.com/news/india/watch-cyclone-yaas-batters-coastal-districts-in-west-bengal/videoshow/82975228.cms 2. Shankarpur Village In East Midnapore Of West Bengal Inundated Due To Cyclone Yaas https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RkC-7Kl7HBA In your project,…

Mariia Gonchar

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Mariia Gonchar

Your design concept is very good and eco friendly. This design reminds me the beautiful words of Sir frank Lloyd Wright " Study Nature, Love Nature, Stay Close to Nature, It will never fail you". I appreciate your work and design concept. I must add few things, The first thing is you are working on eco friendly design all the space are properly designed linked with natural environment. But you must focus on materials which you are using for such a beautiful design. Try to utilize the natural…

Zigar Khan

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Zigar Khan