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Apartment projects feedbacks

I like this project. It is well thought out. The presentation page does require some more artistic flare. It could be improved by giving all the images a water color termination. Upper title block and drawing descriptions would greatly improve this project. The Technical drawings for it could be grouped as well and have more detailed legend or description but not necessary for project presentation. The technical drawings also require proper annotation or labels based on Architectural Graphic…

Ermilindo Wesby

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Ermilindo Wesby

Hi Cherise, Congratulation on designing such a nice home! I really liked the concept of the design and how you linked the golden hour with the warmth of family. I would recommend you to add more warm colors (orange, pink, degradation of these two) reflecting sunrise and sunset colors; by doing so the concept will be more reflected as the ambiance will be cozier. Great idea to locate the living area at the heart of the house to increase socialization and togetherness, I would suggest to add…

Martine Hedary

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Martine Hedary

Good job. Everything is included if it's not in the design, it's in the description, your concept design and mechanical work is incredible. Very good project.

Mohammed Qutaiba Al Nahhas

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Mohammed Qutaiba Al Nahhas

In first I want to congratulate you for your futuristic design. Here are some advices which in my opinion could help your final design to achieve his goal: - use some real traditional materials like clay, wood or stone (usually find in mountain region, maybe also in the project region, because concrete and steel could not be considered traditional materials) - in my opinion it might be interesting to make a roof inspired by relief, which would send to the shape of the specific mountain…

Sergiu-Andrei BRIȘCULESCU

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Sergiu-Andrei BRIȘCULESCU

First of all, congratulations on this project with a strong concept that focuses on the history of the port of Beirut. I think your project has great potential. Each of the buildings on your proposal is conceptually strong. The strength of the project is using architectural interventions as a reminder of the past. As such, preserving the silo building as a monument representing the deceased and proposing a bridge to let visitors explore the explosion spot are great ideas. Hence, this makes…

Cagil Yurdakul Toker

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Cagil Yurdakul Toker

Hi Darya, Its a good attempt to start developing the sense of a concept in the field of architecture by the surrounding things and likeness etc., that you designed the project by getting the inspiration from shark, what really would have helped you was to understand the function of gills that respiration: and this could have translated into the design as an element for natural/ fresh air. etc. Although I really appreciate you for your technical knowledge about architecture. Keep on learning.…

Ahsan Raza

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Ahsan Raza

Project seems interesting and her thought process is appreciable. So much thinking is behind in this project like, the door swing directions, having a glass partition to prevent water splashing, and even with finishes. Points to improve. Toilet layout to be rethought. The location where the WC is placed obstructs the movement pattern. Too much lighting fixtures and fittings. Should be more efficient. Could have given provision for hair dryer and shaver sockets.

Vijesandiran Vidhushan

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Vijesandiran Vidhushan

Good start, keep going. Always keep your project reel and simple. Simplicity is the most popular way to achieve a good project. In my opinion simplicity is beauty.

Sabine Yaacoub

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Sabine Yaacoub

Good afternoon. The concept, in my opinion, is quite well developed and presented. In my opinion, it is worth working out the main panoramic view of the port from above in more detail (image 1), maybe add bright colors or add functional zoning schemes, territorial location in thin lines. You also can add several panoramic images from different viewpoints.

Mariia Redkolis

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Mariia Redkolis

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