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Hello Dears First of all, congratulations for the good idea. But there are some things that I would like to mention: There was no north direction in the sheets so that I could analyze the orientations of the spaces. So, how much are the fields or spaces exposed to the wind, etc., and how are they controlled? Because it is possible to design porches, pergolas, etc. with brick, metal, etc. materials. The next issue is the location of the meditation and picnic spaces next to each other, which…
It's amazing to see such intensive work and its attempt to conceptualize and materialize the complex phenomena of urban-rural integration. The whole process could have included more engagement from the residents of rural and urban and their interactions. The proposals are also very much based on building infrastructures, could it have avenues to integrate nature by open spaces through the typologies for spatial re-organization? I appreciate the thorough analysis and volume of work, it's…
I appreciate the idea of emphasizing the usage of the park by 'families', it promotes family spirit in an era where people are better left alone by themselves. The choice of curvature in designing the built forms and pathways surely reveals its relation to the existing and natural features. The 2D (plans) drawings show a merge with nature, however, I believe the three-dimensional expressions could have been more submissive; aligning parallel with the contour lines that exist could have made it…
Hi Siyan I would like to express my appreciation for your innovative idea of incorporating irregular window shapes into the design. However, I would like to address a concern regarding the security aspect of the garage, which appears to be open to the living room area. In another document, I noticed that you mentioned the inclusion of a window, which has left me somewhat confused. I would like to take this opportunity to commend you on your excellent work and the thoroughness of your study.…
Design: The project brief is very well researched. An in depth analysis of library spaces for present & future can be understood through the research however, the same couldn’t be seen reflecting to a satisfactory degree in the design. Form development is commendable, the spaces can be seen crafted for ease of use and creating a social environment in the library. Spatially, how open, closed or social and private a library should be, if explored could have helped in the designing efficient…
Design: Making use of site context to develop the design concept is commendable and very well thought. Form wise, the design could have been more explored, considering water the design doesn’t showcase easy fluidity. Also, requirements of an science center should have been explored and used for shaping the design. Design Communication: The description lacked clarity in terms of requirements of science center architecturally which reflected in design. Core concept or star of the design seemed…
Dear Ogla, I am full of admiration for the remarkable work you have just presented to us. I am sure that you will have a fruitful career in architecture and even in urban planning. You have provided all the infirmations that can help anyone to understand this magnificent project. All my congratulations
David C. NSIBULAadvisor
the idea of the Form Follows Environment is very interesting. Exploring designs with environmental considerations and what is very unique is the exploration of renewable natural energy in the form of buildings, excellent ideas and design decisions.
Yaseri D Apritasariadvisor
Interesting concept and idea, interesting site with reservoir potential. This potential can be optimized by providing community space facilities in the area around the reservoir. Can be used as a sports area, pedestrian path, or a tourist spot. And also direct residential buildings to have a view of the reservoir.
Yaseri D Apritasariadvisor