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I like this project. It is well thought out. The presentation page does require some more artistic flare. It could be improved by giving all the images a water color termination. Upper title block and drawing descriptions would greatly improve this project. The Technical drawings for it could be grouped as well and have more detailed legend or description but not necessary for project presentation. The technical drawings also require proper annotation or labels based on Architectural Graphic…
Hi Mihaela, Very interesting design approach that will definitely attract people’s attention. I really liked the colour palette, chosen materials, and lighting disposition. Keep up the good work!
Good job. Everything is included if it's not in the design, it's in the description, your concept design and mechanical work is incredible. Very good project.
Mohammed Qutaiba Al Nahhasadvisor
it's a very good idea to base your approach on the deconstruction of this place and to use the deconstruvism movement to rebuild this area. This during deconstructivism is much more than a matter of building form. I suggest you to deepen the subject (Deconstruvism) both as a concept and as an arcitectural movement and adopt it for this project
First of all, congratulations on this project with a strong concept that focuses on the history of the port of Beirut. I think your project has great potential. Each of the buildings on your proposal is conceptually strong. The strength of the project is using architectural interventions as a reminder of the past. As such, preserving the silo building as a monument representing the deceased and proposing a bridge to let visitors explore the explosion spot are great ideas. Hence, this makes…
Cagil Yurdakul Tokeradvisor
Hi, Maream Merza First of all, I would like to appreciate you for your Sketching Skills through which you made it too easy for us and even for a layman to understand your research work. Secondly, you have proposed your project with relevant technical details. When coming to the design part you could have explored it more with the study of the main design elements of Roman Architecture and Modern Architecture. There is a lot of information in the presentation which needs to be placed in a…
Good start, keep going. Always keep your project reel and simple. Simplicity is the most popular way to achieve a good project. In my opinion simplicity is beauty.
Good afternoon. The concept, in my opinion, is quite well developed and presented. In my opinion, it is worth working out the main panoramic view of the port from above in more detail (image 1), maybe add bright colors or add functional zoning schemes, territorial location in thin lines. You also can add several panoramic images from different viewpoints.
I really appriciate your approach towards desiging a larger site as well as an environmentally challenging site. I would appriciate if you could approach this in the mode of architecture. Other than introducing different spaces as per your design brief , It would be ideal, if you could explain how the spaces connect with each other while reponding to public flow and functions. How you have addressed the natural site and natural flow. You can emphasize the methods of handeling the natural sites…