PROJECTS FEEDBACK

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University projects feedbacks

This project is a bit difficult for me to critique, because I do not have enough cultural knowledge to confidently say what is 'good' or 'bad' about your design. I will say that the people in your research, and the one praying individual in your rendering, are powerful. But the lack of people in many of your drawings make the project feel more object-focused than subject-focused. The landscape of your project also feels like an afterthought, rather than an opportunity to either reinforce your…

Philip Horton

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Philip Horton

The geometric and material influences of Louis Khan seem to be stronger here than the influences of the river, or of the concept of a goli. I would like to be able to better understand the dynamic conditions of the river through this project. Does the river rise and fall? Is there any risk of flooding at the library, and if so, how has that informed the design? Also, the goli concept seems to be only somewhat successful here, because the space in the middle still feels more like an atrium…

Philip Horton

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Philip Horton

The approach, which includes interdisciplinarity and the relationship of subjective, personal, and neutral perceptions of the problem and characteristics of the area in general, gave added value to the project. The main (general) project aim is good and connected with its application to the port area through urban planning and design principles. A particular contribution of the work is the extensive analysis of local culture, lifestyle, and needs of local citizens, which were the basis for…

Mirjana Barać

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Mirjana Barać

This leisure center is a great design idea, with the location carefully chosen for the target group (students). I would love to spend time in the building as a student. The building is characterized by glazing, which gives views and allows for daylighting in spaces. The project description mentioned the use of daylighting in the auditorium. However, this is not captured very well in the drawings. Also, with such a large auditorium, it will be prudent to establish ventilation systems and energy…

Kwabena Abrokwa Gyimah

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Kwabena Abrokwa Gyimah

The student makes a good attempt to inscribe a seemingly functional object with an interesting composition into a complex relief, which, in my opinion, he succeeded. 1 At first, I would like information on the functional groups of premises in the text part. Hence there was a clearer relationship between groups of rooms and then the shaping of the volume. Can highlight functional areas. Due to the fact that not all floor plans are shown. Or they are typical repeating. 2 Taking into account the…

Maxim Artamonov

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Maxim Artamonov

Очень интересная работа Аюши Луниа. Представленная работа полностью соответствует представленной теме. Интересно решено функциональное пространство, зонирование, согласно представленной идеи проекта как функции самообучения. Хорошо представлено объемно-планировочное решение библиотеки. Круг как символ бесконечности и центр композиции дерево , символ роста самообучения и жизни на земле. Представлены все необходимые помещения. Особо представлена возможность доступа маломобильных групп…

Maxim Artamonov

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Maxim Artamonov

The student makes a very good attempt with her idea articulations. However these observations and suggestions will help improve the scheme: 1. the existing situation has not been depicted in images and sketches to appreciate and compare the proposals afterwards, 2. Did you consider the needs of users including tourists by obtaining feedback on the existing by any statistical data such as interviews and surveys, 3. the proposed master plan could have been labelled in English as an alternative…

Joseph Danquah

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Joseph Danquah

This architecture has an excellent central courtyard, which creates tension for being in the space. Positive matters- Central courtyard. Negative matters- 1. The Architecture represents more a shopping complex rather than a Library. 2. The central space is not very connected to the exterior of the building, rather it represents combativeness. 3. Use of extended floor slab seems unnecessary 4. Use of inconsistent arch-some are for entry, and some are very cosmetic and false. 5. Less Climatic…

Shahriar Iqbal Raj

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Shahriar Iqbal Raj

As an interior project, it is fun to see. The idea of CAT is represented by colors and a dark Bat Man-like environment. It would have been nice to see some daylight impact the space. Daylight in architecture expresses the inherent quality of the space and shape. Positive things- 1. The interior space looks techy and represents CAT. 2. Light represents a mode of strength and an industrial look. Negative: 1. Interior space should be judged both with artificial and natural light. 2. Bit gloomy…

Shahriar Iqbal Raj

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Shahriar Iqbal Raj

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