THE RESTRUCTURING OF AN ABANDONED VILLAGE

The history of kfardebian ( a district in Lebanon ) values " Al Salib Valley ” as being the most inhabited and the most active space at the beginning of the 1613s, and later turns into an abandoned site, so how can we revive this rich site and attract people to come back? Al salib Valley was known for its rich and bountiful land and a destination for the inhabitants of the villages and surrounding areas to buy vegetables, fruits and products. The old town was abandoned, leaving behind ruins…

Ondřej Valach

3D specialist

www.lumion.cz

Czech

Feedback A

Try to add more variants of trees, these looks exactly the same, so its texture mix together. It can also help to use better shadows settings to sepparate each tree.

#positive

model focus mood idea

#negative

greenery shadows textures

Feedback A/2

Using more of 2-point perspective can help to introduce the real dimmensions of this design. It is also better for observer to understand space. To be clear, I do not think it is neccessarry to add 2 point perspective at maximum level.

Feedback A/3

It is pitty, that there is no ¨real skies¨ effect used, or some HDRI map. You can instantly improve your rendering just by using this one effect. You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3qjDhWqOkaI

Feedback B

composition of this picture is not perfect, you should think about edges. It is always better to let some margin ¨clear¨. Otherwise, it takes your shapes visualy for the edge and destroy your main lines.