Le Thi Ai Tho

advisor

Hanoi Architectural University

Vietnam

Architecture is culture and for people. more

Dear Alaa Ashraf,

This is a good project that the author has put a lot of effort into. I really like the way the problem is presented and the division of time into past, present, and future. The spatial division is also appropriate for the exhibition scenario. The lighting and color of the interior contribute to the clarity of the project's ideas. The objects and exhibition space are quite unique and impressive to the viewers.

However, I have some additional suggestions for you, such as:

Need changing the level of the floor creates a sense of difficulty and harshness of war while also creating a distinctive interior space.
Exploiting more diverse walls such as traces of war instead of just hanging pictures and displaying images.
The project needs to highlight the specific features of the war in Egypt.
The reception area needs to correspond to the museum space and be impressive enough for viewers.

Best regard,
Le Thi Ai Tho

Dear Le Thi Ai Tho,
Thank you for your valuable feedback. I appreciate the time you took to share your feedback and suggestions on how I can improve the project.