Tutti Insieme is a project based on Tartufo di Pizzo, an Italian street dessert. Street culture is the main point of this project, Tartufo di Pizzo. The… more
Professor of architecture at the University of Alicante, he teaches the subject "Singular… more
Hello Sera, congratulations for your work.
First, I would like to say that it's great that you present a lot of renders, but don't forget that the main tool that Architects have to explain a project is the plan: you only included a very small one, in a panel full of things, so it's not easy to understand what is happening there, how it works, and so on.
Regarding the use of the space, keep in mind that is a public space where many people are supposed to enter (many of them do not know this place). So, this idea of the different steps may be good for "creating spaces" and areas of use, but it's very dangerous for people: they could fall.
I also see lots of "stuff" inside this space: this makes people not to pay attention to the most important parts of the space, so maybe it's a good idea to "clean up" the proposal a bit, and and keep only the essentials.
Last tip: I would like to remind you that Architecture has its own language; "Tartufo di Pizzo" is an Italian street dessert, not Architecture itself... the conceptual idea behind the architecture has to be more than just a metaphor.
Good luck in your future proffesional life!
First of all, I would like to thank you very much for the criticism and feedbacks you gave to my project. What you said caused me to look at my project from a different perspective. I will develop my project taking into account the criticisms and feedbacks you have made. Thank you very much for taking the time to talk about my project.
Tutti Insieme is a project based on Tartufo di Pizzo, an Italian street dessert. Street culture is the main point of this project, Tartufo di Pizzo.
The following words are the concept words for this project ; nest, intimacy, dynamism, path - icon, fulnness - space, active, new generation. The project idea is to design a cafe which came from a dessert. Like it said in the beginning. This project based on an Italin strred dessert. Project location is in a open space plaza.
Street culture is the main point of Tutti Insieme. 3 of Italy's cities have been selected which are Bologna, Verona and Rome. These certain areas have been intersected from their city plans which is taken from the maps. A gridal system was created on their intersected area. Some places have been scaneed on this area and some places have been left blank. This process is matching with the concept word fullness - space. Some of the scanned areas have been exploded and as a result of this process the concept model is created. On the other hand the scanned areas and blank areas helped this project with th function plan layout.
In Tuttİ Insieme, the main construction material is concrete. Because of the level differences on the floor and as a result of this project stability this material is chosen. After the concrete there are some insulations for maintain the heat in the inside and floor. The walls are made of YTONG and drywalls. The ceiling are suspended ceilings which are modular and easy to construct. The glasseswhich are used in this project are double sided. And fot the take out zone in this project the wall system is trombe wall system. Recessed lightning is used as well.