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Urban Hotel at city hub

Taifur Rashid

student

Premier University, Chittagong.

Bangladesh

Architecture

A hotel is an establishment that provides paid lodging on a short-term basis. Facilities provided may range from a modest-quality mattress in a small room to… more

Hotel

Omid Abbassi

advisor

https://www.bme.hu/

Iranian

"Architecture is a dangerous mixture of power and impotence." ( Rem Koolhaas ) more

Dear Taifur Rashid,
First of all, I would like to say congratulations on your nice project and also your attempt at participating in the Inspireli Awards. There are some remarks about your project and as always I'd like to go by pros and cons.
When I was checking your project the very first eye-catching thing for me was the professional level of documentation of the project both in 2D drawings and also 3D visualizations, which is totally admirable.
The way of presentation of the project is somehow a Post-digital style, mostly in 3D renderings that is well defined by selected perspective views. However, I would say it could be more comprehensive if you could include the environment and the context of the site of the project in the 3D views as well for a better understanding of the total situation of the plot as you mentioned in the description part.
Regarding the description part, there are some missing points that I would like to mention and draw your attention there.
When it comes to describe the topic It is vital to have a cohesion in story line that can be followed step by step. In terms of the project Idea it was a little bit confusing to track the main Idea shaping your project. I would suggest to pick a basic idea and then branch it out, instead of too much definition around the topic.
Finally I wish you the best in your architecture path and hope that I could help you with these little words improve your future practices.

Best,
Omid Abbassi

Thank you so much for your feedback.
I will try my best to consider your feedback to the next project