University for Business and Technology - UBT
Urban Design and Landscape
A completely new idea, inspired by one of the most famous things this city has and it's the form of the "grape" that we use for making the most delicious vine.
I don't understand why not use grass with 3D blades. It is one click and adds a completely different character to the visualization. (here is an example: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vU2jo4gDHlY) Using such a dark sky is also a bit inappropriate, I would use a raadshi that does not have such a distinctive dark on the horizon.
These characters does not look natural. Use people in groups, sitting on benches and so on.
It is not advisable to combine these colors together. Such shadows should be lighter and significantly.
To the greenery - these are not flower beds, but an exhibition of individual plants. This is how the plants work very unnatural. The texture of the grass should definitely have 3d blades, here it is very visible.
The visualization is very much divided by the colors of the terrain, the model and overall, it is poorly understood. I would replace the white terrain with something else.
This could be main shot, but i will preffer to use human perspective. This camera is too hight.