Tutti Insieme is a project based on Tartufo di Pizzo, an Italian street dessert. Street culture is the main point of this project, Tartufo di Pizzo. The following words are the concept words for this project ; nest, intimacy, dynamism, path - icon, fulnness - space, active, new generation. The project idea is to design a cafe which came from a dessert. Like it said in the beginning. This project based on an Italin strred dessert. Project location is in a open space plaza.
There are a number of windows in the design, but almost no ambient light. inside there should be much more light, or at least a contrast of light and darkness, visible.
I would use a larger focal length and focus more on the interior itself, now there is an unnecessarily large area of the image that shows the entrance. This is not movc graphically interesting, nor in terms of content. The interior will be much more interesting.
Using semi-transparent figures is nice when showing a scale, but be careful with them when trying to capture the function of space. There are a lot of them here and they merge together - it's best seen in the middle of the picture. If there were half of the characters, that would be enough. If the intention was to show the use of space, it would be better to put some 2D characters or 3D characters there. The impression of space would again be simplified by the use of a larger focal length camera.
I think it would be a very nice space to build, but its visualization has a few flaws. I feel like the visualizations are as if I came there as a coffee customer and just turned around quickly and took a few photos. This is not how a presentation is made. There are too many things in each photo. It is then not clear what to focus on. It is better to choose one element and pay attention to it. Showing everything at once never works well. A nice shot is the last one where you can see the view inside. But you could also do a detail of the library, a view from a coffee table, a detail of a green wall. Just choose the elements that are important and show them one by one.