Behrooz Nakhaei

advisor

https://stb.iau.ir/fa

Iranian

In the words of Paola Antonelli “Design is not style. It’s not about giving shape to the shell.… more

Dear Manqi
As someone who has a lot of experience in rendering, I fully understand that there are many challenges in showing ideas in the form of rendering. But I will state the things that came to my mind:

One of the important items in interior spaces is light. In this design, it would have been better to pay more attention to the lighting design, each section had its own lighting, for example, the use of spot lights on the dining tables or the use of lampshades in the rest area. In general, created different spatial qualities.
since it is a rest area, it was better to show some contrast in the space to create a better atmosphere for rest. Atmosphere is a amazing topic that I suggest you read Peter Zumthor's books in this regard.

In the central part, the vertical surfaces intended for televisions would be better designed as a volume to have dimensions, and on the other hand, the connection of these surfaces to the floor and ceiling has no definition, which makes most of these surfaces meaningless.

With respect
Behrooz Nakhaei