Majd Abu-Ajamieh

advisor

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Jordanian

Ecodesign, Landscape more

The concept is interesting, but it leaves the reader with some unanswered questions. Since an upright cube is more stable than a tilted one what makes it a stable house? What makes it unique in its stability? And what is the story behind it? Regarding functionality, the door from the living room to the outdoor space through the sliding partition seems hardly accessible because of the inclined door threshold as shown in the section. The outdoor stair seems like an interesting concept but the long journey through the stair doesn't look suitable for a residential project especially that convenience should be prioritized in this case. And I think you should work more on the post-production of the final image maybe by adding more brightness, reducing the saturation and adding some human figures. You should also try to emphasize on the building by differentiating it from background to present it as a strong statement within its context.

I hope this helps, and I wish you all the best in your progress!