Juraj Dulencin

advisor

www.fa.stuba.sk

Slovak

- lecturer and head of the Institute of architecture, Faculty of civil engineering, Brno University… more

Hello Adnan.
Let me make two comments about your project.
The first is from an urban planning point of view. The project is divided into six sections connected by a main axis. Is this choice of the number six based only on the function itself (water park, popular park, etc.), or is there some symbolism involved? In my opinion, it is always important to consider the symbolism mentioned in the project. In your case specifically, the number six. What does the number six symbolize and what does the author want to say? I'm asking why the number six, why not seven or five. As we know, the number six is characterised by the words harmony and concord. It is the number of the sense of beauty and aesthetics. Which is what your concept ultimately translates into. If that was the intention, congratulations.
The second one is from an architectural point of view. I would recommend to you considering the diversity of expression of the six objects. I understand that they present a different function, but they do not have an element that unites them into a one project, so that it is clear that the creator is one architect - you. Each object is different, like made by a differents architects. But here I would recommend to consider an element that would unify it. It could be for example: colour, (like the white colour of architect RIchard Meier's architecture), or material, (like the concrete of Tad Ando's architture).
In any case, you have created an interesting project and I wish you much success in your future studies.